Critique another classmate's music video

I wanted to comment on richard's Music video. I love the different camera shots he took when filming the video, it makes it seem like when he is practicing for his next competition that he has all of these audience members. I also enjoyed how he added in the flash back to when he was actually competing. The only criticism I personally have is that I didn't understand right away that he was working to get better because he had lost the competition. I at first thought he was practicing to compete for the first time and when he was visualizing the competition it hadn't happened yet. So the only advice I'd have since you always have to consider all of your audience, even the dumb ones like me (lol) is have it more evident that it was a past event and not a future one. Other than that it looks like he took a lot of time to put it together and it shows in the work!